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It's a funeral. But only one figure shows that hallow eyed grief of one who truly has lost something invaluable. There is no eulogy of painful farewells to the dearly departed, just the quite murmuring of the crowd. With their tired eyes finally finding some resolve. For them it was over, for her it had all began.

She threw a single blood red rose as the casket fell. Every eye follows as it descends into the wounded gaping ground. “Sorry” A single word barely spoken and heard by no one but the wind. It was the only word he'd left with her. Sorry that you left, or sorry for the blood you left behind? She asks from her sorrowed silence. No one would answer, even if she asked aloud. No one had answers.  

There is a strange silence, only the wind seems to have a voice at all as it moans over the slabs of rock that mark where more wounds were made.  Where they were remembered. Even if it would be easier to forget. That is if forgiveness is possible.

She shivers from an absent warmth, as a silent sob escapes her.   Could you have caused all this? She asks her lusterless eyes gazing at the hard eyed crowd.   Could you be the monster that haunts them, that caused so many wounds   She asks, as if somehow he could answer from where he slept six feet below.

The sound of fallen being crushed beneath booted feet gently breaks the silence as all but one leave. She watches them leave, and lets a single tear fall, followed by so many more.

“Why?!” She asks her delicate voice torn as she demands an answer, though only the darting squirrels could hear, they didn't even give her a quizzed glance. They couldn't answer. No one could.  “Why?” She asked once more, barely more then a sob as her quivering frame collapsed among the fallen leaves.
©2009 ~LadyKylin
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For Thursday Prose.

this is for :iconwwoagol:

Other then the basic comments I want to know what you think is up with the relationship between the deceased, the girl and the crowd.

Note to all I will not eat or otherwise damage you for criticism and grammar. Go through with a fine tooth comb.

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:iconrara--avis:
Really, really good. A lot more depressing than the last one's. I've expressed what I felt could be edited through IM already. :3 The rest is brilliant, Kylin, love it.

On the note of the crowd and girl and the dead man... The crowd maybe casual friends, loose relatives? People who come to pretend that they knew and gave a crap about the person but really didn't?
Did she kill him? Or unintentionally bring about his demise in some way or another? It sort of seems that way but at the same time she seems really attached, so I'm not sure what to think of their relationship. Maybe there was some sort of misunderstanding or something? She witnessed his death and blames herself, maybe?

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:iconladykylin:
I want to hear more guesses before I say what's what. Or at least what it was supposed to be originally.

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:icontwitchy1234:
It's good!

The second last and last paragraphs are kinda awkward though. It's like you're trying to squeeze in too much description where there isnt really room for any. Umm it breaks the flow

BUT ITS GOOD 8D

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:iconladykylin:
It does a little, but it needs to be there.

And you didn't say what you thought the relationship between the crowd, the girl and the deceased was.

This piece is a bit of an experiment I have a really odd connection that I want to get across without actually saying it.

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I'm older now then I've ever been, and younger now then I'll ever be.

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